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The letter

stech81

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Sep 15, 2015
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Drink more beer.
( sorry that one was for GTJT)

Dear team ( this may be too long I'll do better next time)
Just win.
Signed , the other drunk.
 
The old switcheroo, writing to the team instead of the coach!
Might I suggest leaving out Dear and Other, for next time? Sorry to critique your lengthy masterpiece, these old eyes get fatigued having to read "War and Peace" before all of these television games coming up this weekend starting Thursday.
 
I liked it, I guess. I give it a C-. I think it was wordy as usual and poorly organized. But, the deep meaning and use of the words "other drunk" provided a mysterious slant to this week's letter. I would've not used the word "Just". It adds 4 keystrokes to an already lengthy letter and adds no significant value.

Hopefully next time we can get one equally thought provoking but something which doesn't require hours to read. *SIGH*
 
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